Curty ([info]holeinxmyhart) wrote,
@ 2004-09-28 13:19:00
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Current mood: jealous
Current music:Zao

somethin i wrote
i wrote this last night...tell me what you think of it!!!!


Pain filled emotions cover my heartless body.I wait for her, but care for nothing else. One day I will wait too long and end up dying alone.Please save me from my demise. You will find noone else like me, and you will have your chance more than once, and will pass each one of them up for a filler of the real thing. I behold what you need, but yet you look over me and find a substitute that seems to last very shortly. Your love is like a gun, with the barrel shoved down my throat waiting for you to pull the trigger. Kill me now for the pain of you breaking my heart is far too greater than you killing me. Let me finally rest in peace with your beautiful presence in my mind......<333



alrighty i wrote that last night...please comment to let me know what you think...PLEASE!!!! later peepz

<3




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[info]xx18visionsxx
2004-09-28 05:33 pm UTC (link)
your creative juices were flowin lol.

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[info]xo_imyours_xo
2004-09-28 05:36 pm UTC (link)
yeah im with britt your creative juices they was a flowin. but its good.
love you

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[info]girlsatimebomb
2004-09-28 08:20 pm UTC (link)
i like it...
but i love you
annd im really bored
soo i think its about time you came to save me

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[info]xreadmylipsx
2004-10-17 09:38 pm UTC (link)
i never saw this before.
i think you did a good job writing it.
but i don't like the subject. ♥

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